Malaysia is the most beautiful place in the world. Day by day, tourism rates in Malaysia increase because them enchaunted by Malaysia scenery. As many tourist know, Malaysia has many attaractions for the example Kuala Lumpur City Center(KLCC), Mountain Kinabalu(the highest mountain in the Asean), Cherating beach and many more. Besides, many tourist have come to Malaysia to vacation, meanwhile they want to study in many course especially English(British Council ) because Malysia is peaceful place.
Furthermore, mostly Malaysia finance get from agriculture, food production, tourism, car industries and many more. For your information, Malaysia agriculture is called FAMA.
This instution has helped many Malaysian citizen. Malaysia's rubber and palm oil production is the biggest in the world. PROTON is the only national car industiry in Malaysia which make me proud of its.It because many country in the world don't have their own national car industries.
Before I has forgetten, didn't you know about Malaysia languanges? Malaysia has many languanges, for the example Malay,Tamil,Chinise,English and many more(I cannot tell all because to a lot and I don't know, hehe). Therefore, Malaysia has many culture and religous.I don't know how to explain more.You just come to Malaysia(fantastic) and you will amaze with its.
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Lots of information and ideas - well done! Especially since you wrote this on your own!!
ReplyDeleteGood division into three paragraphs around topics. Good use of linkers.
The last sentence is good and could stand in its own paragraph, e.g. 'I don't know how to explain any more - come and see you for yourself and be amazed!'
You could use: 'Malaysia gets a large proportion of its incoem from....'
There's a mix of formal, ('For your information, ...' and informal ' before I forget'.
Good work!
See you next week!
Emma