Tuesday, February 8, 2011

Hi my name is Ethar.I am from Iraq and I have five sibling.I've been in Malaysia for three months and half.I am studying English at the moment to do the IELTS exam and I have to get 5.5 scours at less to study master at UPM in physical communication physics filed
My hobbies it is to be successful business man in the filed of my specialization and establish my own company
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  1. bcwritingstudentFebruary 8, 2011 at 5:59 AM

    Hi Ethar

    Thanks for writing on the BLOG. Which city do you come from in Iraq - Baghdad? Do your family all live in Iraq?

    I'm going to write your paragraph again with some changes. Compare it to yours and notice the differences. You can ask me or Emma if you don't understand.

    Hi. My name is Ethar. I am from Iraq and I have five brothers and sisters. I've been in Malaysia for three and a half months. I am studying English at the moment to do the IELTS exam and I have to get at least 5.5 to study a masters at UPM in physical communication physics.

    My dream is to be a successful businessman in my specialist field, and establish my own company.

    When you type on the computer, always leave one space after commas and full stops. Well done getting all the capital letters! Good spelling too.

    See you next Monday.

    Mary

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  2. bcwritingstudentFebruary 8, 2011 at 4:34 PM

    thank u Mary I will keep struggling with this

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  3. bcwritingstudentFebruary 9, 2011 at 6:21 AM

    Hi Mary actually I could not understand why I should use brother & sister instead of sibling ???

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  4. TeacherFebruary 13, 2011 at 6:00 AM

    Mary, I don't know if you agree, but I think that 'siblings' is a bit old fashioned and formal. It's nice and personal to say how many sisters and how many brothers.
    Emma

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