Everyone knows that exercise is necessary and important for good health and I agree with it. Because full of happiness is difficult to achieve without good health.
From medical point of view, the exercise or sport extends human life. Exercise make our body to strengthen skeleton, muscles, circulatory and nervous system. It helps to work internal organs of body. Obviously, exercise helps to protect from many diseases or infection. If you need healthy and slim body, that sport and exercise are good way for being in a good fit.
If you want to be beautiful and healthy person, you should help your body. Remember exercise is way to successful life.
Thanks Tynara. You convinced me - I'm off to the gym!!
ReplyDeleteYou have the structure of a good paragraph here -topic sentence, supporting evidence, and a concluding sentence. It's just ONE paragraph though so you should format it as only one.
I would rewrite your first two sentences like this:
Everyone knows that exercise is necessary and important for good health and I agree, because happiness is difficult to achieve without good health. (Don't start sentences with joining words - and, but, so, because.)
Thanks for writing on the blog. Do you read what other people write?
Mary
These lines are gud enough to b written in paragraph...
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