Iran is large country in Asia.Tehran is the capital city in Iran and the second city is Esfahan.Esfahan is a middle of Iran.However,Tehran is a North city in Iran.It has many neighbours,including Iraq,Pakestan,UAE,Afghanestan,Tajikestan and etc.
Esfahan has a many beautiful places and scenery.For example Siose pol and Khajoo bridge.And Menarjonboon is a very beautiful place for visit.Many people thinks the Zayande rood is wet during a year,although just is wet six mounths in a year.Iran has many mountains and rivers,three big seas,two islannd,two deserts,beautiful road and etc.In Iran has specially scenery at the North.Iran is conect with three big seas including, the Persian-Gulf ,Caspian and Oman.
Oficial language in Iran is persian,but it has six another languages,including Torkey,Kurdy,Arabic and etc.
Yasmin & Firouz
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Yasmin and Firouz,
ReplyDeleteInstead of having 4 short sentences you could maybe use a relative clause, e.g. Tehran, which is in the north, is the capital city and Esfahan in the south is the second city.
In the second paragraph, I'd split it into two paragraphs around two different topics. Can you find and organise the information into two topics?
Good try!
See you next week!
Emma