Wednesday, February 9, 2011

It is difficult to learn a new language

I think learn a new language is difficult for some people,because for learn a new language you must interested,if you dislike,learning is difficult for you.For example learn a English language is very important for person,because English language is international in the world and if you speak English very well traveling is very easy for you,because in all of the world people understand English and I think in the all of the good university in the world teaching English.So learn a new language is very important, specially English.

Yasmin

1 comment:

  1. Hi Yasmin

    It's good to see you making use of the Blog! I think you should look at this paragraph again because your supporting evidence doesn't support your topic sentence. You have mostly written about why English is important. It's really important in writing to keep to the topic so why don't you try again.

    See you on Monday!

    Mary

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