I think sport is very important in life because moving is necessary for body and move is cause for arrived blood at braid.I think if people exercise every day,in the future have a healthy body.And exercise with eat vegetable is useful.For example in my country swim is very important and children must learn swim at primary school because this exercise is very good for health.And then sport is good reason for health.
Yasmin
Yasmin,
ReplyDeleteI think you should swap the second and first sentences round. The first is more like supporting evidence and the second is a good topic sentence. Good point about blood to the brain. Can you think of any more points like that? You talk about sport, but what about exericse that isn't sport, such as going for walks in the country?
See you next week.
Emma