We should consider something in order when we want to choose a flat or apartment for renting.Firs
of all,safe place is really important for every person.In addition,cost is a vital factor and influence to
your choice.In my opinion,neighbourhood is really important.For example, access to public
transportation and facilities can be vital for people.moreover,most of people prefer to live in a quite place
and they want to near workplace or class.Finally,furniture is important,too.If they are new and are made in
a high quality you can live easier.
Samaneh
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Hi Samaneh
ReplyDeleteI like this paragraph because all of your ideas are directly related to the topic and you have put them in order of importance. You've used linking words well too. Did you think about having a concluding sentence?
On the computer, we leave one space after full stops and commas. It makes it easier to read.
Good work Samaneh. This is how you write a good paragraph!
Mary
Samaneh,
ReplyDeleteYes, I agree with Mary - this is good! I can understand which points you think are the most important too.
The first line could be 'You should consider several things when you are choosing a house or flat to rent.'
Keep it up!
See you next week!
Emma