Thursday, April 14, 2011

things i like to do on the weekend *yasin*

There are several things I like to do on the weekend.First of all I enjoy playing football with my flat mates.In addition, I like to go out with my friends and have some fun with them.I like also,chatting with my family and my friends who are far away from me.The most important thing that I like to do on the weekend is sleeping until i get enough,I like weekend so much.
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  1. TeacherApril 17, 2011 at 6:27 PM

    Yasin,

    Good use of discourse markers to show importance. One verb is repeated 5 times. Can you find it? Try not to use the same word several times in one piece of writing. Use synonyms, if you can.

    See you in class!
    Emma

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