Wednesday, April 13, 2011

Great place to visit **Yasin**

South Africa is amazing place to visit.It has got one of the most exciting attractions in whole Africa.Safari journeys is one of the famous interesting places there. There is one of the biggest forests in Africa maybe in the world as well .You can visit the national zoo in the capital Pretoria , where you can see a lot of animals you have ever seen ,such as, lions ,tigers ,and wolves. I recommended people who haven't been safari before to visit there,its really unbelievable place.
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  1. TeacherApril 13, 2011 at 6:26 PM

    Yasin,

    Sounds a great place to visit! Have you been?

    You could rephrase your sentence. 'Safaris are are one of the most famous things to do in South Africa'.

    You're missing a few articles. Can you find where?

    No need for the comma before wolves.

    You should ask Pam about South Africa!!

    Well done.

    Have a good weekend!
    Emma

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