Wednesday, April 13, 2011

Exercise is nicesrary for good health

The good way to protect your health do exercise. They are many advantages to do exercise. One advantage is lossing weight to be more healthy. Another advantage is you feel activ and high energy. The greatest advantage is good for frame of mind because after you do exercise you going to forget all bad things or at least you do not feel worried. Obviously,if you do exercise you feel more better.

Amal

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  1. I think,a correct dictation for "nicesrary" is "necessary "
    Parisa:)

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  2. Yes Parisa, that's the correct spelling!

    Amal, you have some good ideas here, well done. There are other spelling mistakes and sometimes you've left out the verb. Where would you put the verb in first sentence and also in, 'you feel active and high energy'?

    The phrase you need is a good frame of mind or good mental health.

    Have a good weekend!
    Emma

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