Wednesday, April 13, 2011

Exercise is necessary for good health-SARA

one of the most important thing that is necessary for good health is exercise .First of all it helps prevent disease.Also it reduces the risk of heart disease, cancer, high blood pressure, diabetes and other diseases. In addition it can improve your appearance and delay the aging process. finally, when you do exercise in a long time you guarantee your body therefore it is necessary for good health .
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  1. TeacherApril 13, 2011 at 10:17 PM

    Sara,

    Good topic sentence!Prevent disease and reduce the risk are very similar - could you put these in one point?

    I wish we could guarantee our body! I think you mean that your body benefits.

    Have a good weekend and see you Monday!
    Emma

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