Wednesday, April 13, 2011

Is a great place to visit - Kam Seng

Pulau Penang is a great place to visit. Firstly, there is a beautiful beach in Batu Ferringhi. Besides, you can see very special Bar beside the beach. However, you can find some famous restaurants and hotels such as The Ship Restaurant and Hard Rock Hotel, it is a lively street at night. Lastly, the thing you must do in Pulau Penang is to visit the butterfly farm and it is a fantastic place for family with children. In my opinion, Pulau Penang is the place you must go while having holidays.
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  1. TeacherApril 13, 2011 at 10:20 PM

    Kam Seng,

    I like your use of 'firstly' and 'lastly' but 'Besides' and 'However' are not quite the right linkers in your sentences. Can you change them?

    Topic and closing sentences fit together well - good job!

    Emma

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