Tuesday, April 12, 2011

Great place to visit - Sifa

Sydney is a great place to visit. There are a lot of tourist attraction. Sydney Opera House and Harbour Bridge are the landmark of the city. Tourists normally take photograph here and for someone who is love adventure, they can climb the bridge. Australia has also wildlife animals such as kangaroos and koalas. You can't see these animals anywhere else in this world except Australia. Finally, you can find a lot of amazing beaches here for example, Manly Beach, Bondi Beach etc. Therefore, i strongly recommended people spend their spare time in Sydney.
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  1. TeacherApril 13, 2011 at 12:51 AM

    Sifa,

    Well done, good paragraph!

    Don't forget the comma before and after 'such as' and 'for example'.

    I noticed in your other work too, that sometimes the adverb would be better in a different place, e.g. 'Australia also have '

    See you tomorrow@
    Emma

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  2. bcwritingstudentApril 13, 2011 at 11:47 PM

    Thank you for your comment Emma, see you on Monday.

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