Children behavior is very important for parents, because their behavior express parents manners, that's why, treatment of the parents are significant.First of all, Children behavior take after parents manner, because children imitate their parents.
Secondly,parents should teach their children how to treat with other people well, but it should be kindly not angrily,because if parents treat to children friendly, children follow them.
In conclusion, I believe,children manners are the same as their parents.
Parisa :)
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Parisa,
ReplyDeleteYes, I agree. If children are badly behaved it reflects badly on the parents, not the children!
You could reword the first part to, 'Children take after their parents and that's why the way that parents treat their children is important.'
I think you repeat this idea in both points and the conclusions. Are there any other reasons?
See you Monday!
Emma
can't we use our supporting sentences in conclusion sentence, but with another structure?
ReplyDeleteYes, you can if you reword it and if it's the dominant or main argument. However, in your piece I think you need to make other points as it seems to be one point repeated.
ReplyDeleteSee you tomorrow.
Emma