With the wide expansion in the technology environment , computer have became one of the essential things in our life .In the aspects of ,it save our time and it is a "multifunction" devices, people became more interested with computer .
Firstly, computer save our time indeed .Many things could be accomplished during to a short time with even no potential .Admittedly, it have changed our daily life . For example ,ten years ago people were using post mail as a connection between them. Nowadays, it became more easier to send a message by email .
Secondly, it's a "multifunction" could be one of the reason why computer is a necessary part in the life . Internet, Microsoft office , calculator and Recorder are some of the useful function in computer .For instance ,Internet has converted the world to a small village. Moreover, people contact with others by chatting programs. In addition, companies, can performance a high quality documentaries by overwhelming number of graphics programs .
To conclude,I believe that computer have become a necessary device in homes due to the reason that i have mentioned before. I suggest that, such intelligent devices should be developed by companies to serve in every sector we need.
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Abdallah,
ReplyDeleteGood to see you using the phrases to order your essay, such as 'firstly,'.
You really need to think of arguments against that topic statement and perhaps a couple of arguments in favour of it. Your introduction needs to be more general and then you get down to specific points in the 'for' paragraph. You seem to have repeated the same two arguments.
Can you redo this with a balance of arguments?
See you in class!
Emma
Emma , the topic is not an argument !!
ReplyDeleteit seems to be ask for giving a reasons to support the idea only , should i argue also in such case ?