Sunday, July 17, 2011

cars should be banned from the city.

Nowadays , the cars are the things the most useful in the world and more precisely in the city. It's become also for some development country a thing of concurrence betwen the industry of construction of vehicles. What that explain the diversity of mark of automobiles( mercedes benz,BMW,Toyota etc...).
However, the expansion of the automobiles in the world has it some negative effect?And more precisely in the place that there are the most useful(in the city)? With the light of our connaissances, we'll try to answer at this question in the following lines.


In our days, the cars are become necessairy in our community. There have a lot of advantage. First of all, the automobiles are the most important facilitator of displacement for people. With the cars, we can moved from one place to another so easly. Secondly, when you have our own car,you shouldn't take any public transport.For some people that make them very uncomfortable.Finaly, remember that, nowadays and since always the vehicles are things of luxe for some. Today, all rich people have the hight classes of cars and that it's to make the difference. Even if is a disadvantage for some it's a advantage for others.


Although the advantage mention above, the cars have more drawback than positives sides. In the first place,the automobiles are the most productives of monoxide of carbon ;that destroy our environnement and participate at the creation of the pollution. In addition,remember that the Earth is protected by what we call GREENHOUSE.And that monoxide of carbon is destroying the greenhouse and make the environnement hot.That why nowadays, the temperature of Earth grow more and more. Lastly, the traffic jamp and the furious accident are due by cars.So in some way banned cars from the city is definitely right.


In conclusion,even if there have advantages, the cars have lots of disadvantages. Therefore,banned the vehicles from the city can it save the nature and our environnement??






2 comments:

  1. mahamat abdelkerim koiboroJuly 17, 2011 at 11:07 AM

    i'm sorry, i forgot to write my name
    it's by mahamat

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  2. Mahamat,
    Well done for posting on the blog!

    You have 4 good paragraphs and some good ideas with clear thinking. Great! Maybe your first and second arguments against cars are very similar.

    Your word order is sometimes confusing, such as in the 1st and 3rd sentences. Sometimes you pose questions but don't then have question word order. I wonder if you're translating from Arabic directly into English.

    A few words are perhaps not the best choice, such as 'luxe', 'facilitator of displacement', 'the most productives'. Can you think of more appropriate words and phrases for these?

    See you in class!
    Emma

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