Tuesday, November 30, 2010

the disadvantage of use the internet.mohammad a

Most people find internet essencial and could not manage with out them. However,there are three main disadvantage to use the Internet. the first one is theft of personal information. If you use the internet,you may be use your personal information such as name,address,credit card and phone number. Can be accessed by other people to make your problem worse. Secondly,Virus is nothing, but a problem which disrupts the the normal functioning of your computer sistems.Virus attaks to your computers and they can crash hard disck. The last one is Pornographly. This is the biggest threat relate to your children's life. There are thousands of pornographic sits on the internet that can be easily found and can be detremintal factor to letting children use the internet.

1 comment:

  1. Yes, I like this one Mohammad. You have a good topic sentence!

    Compare this sentence to yours -

    If you use the Internet, you may use your personal information such as name, address, credit card, and phone number, which can be accessed by other people.

    I don't understand your second point - virus is nothing. Does that mean it's not a problem/disadvantage?

    In your topic sentence you need an 'ing' form - There are thre main disadvantages to using the Internet.

    Thanks Mohammad!

    Mary

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