Dear Ms.Gorman
I have pleasure in inviting you to the learning English seminar to be held in Maya hotel from 20th to 22th November. Our program includes cultural and free-time activities in the three days contenting visiting twin towers and Central market. Please, find attached itinerary and details of your flight. It would be greatly appreciated if you could send an email to suggest some changes you would like in the program.
I look forward to meeting you in November.
yours sincerely
Bahador Barbod
British Concil
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This is good, but try adding a couple of paragraphs, e.g. After 'flight'.
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includes cultural and free-time activities in the three days contenting visiting twin towers and Central market
try changing the word 'contenting', to something like 'including a visit to ...'