Wednesday, December 8, 2010

mohamad a

Afghanistan was the biggest illicit opium producer in the world in 2008. Afghanistan is a agricultural country,where you can fine many cultivation farm. Most of this land is under grow up Opium poppies. Approximately, Afghanistan produce 93% world Opium and exported all over the world. Because Afghan people are very poor, so they produce drug for earn money, especially during the winter, they can not find employment. Also, there is no law in some part of Afghanistan same like Kandahar and Helmand . Antonio Maria Costa, executive Director of the United Nations saied;' there is no rule of law in most of the southern part of Afghanistan'.
At the result, this opium, which is produce in Afghanistan, exported all over the world by International Mafia. Consequently, some people use it and addicted to it. Most of user, who use drug are young people. Many young people die because of drug.

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  1. A good effort! Check what changes I've made...

    Afghanistan was the biggest illicit opium producer in the world in 2008. Afghanistan is an agricultural country,where you can fine a lot of cultivated farmland. Most of this land is used for the growth of opium poppies. Afghanistan produces approximately 93% of the world's opium and exports it all over the world. Because Afghan people are very poor, they produce the drug to earn money, especially during the winter, when they can not find employment. Also, there is no law in some parts of Afghanistan, such as Kandahar and Helmand . Antonio Maria Costa, executive Director of the United Nations saied;' there is no rule of law in most of the southern part of Afghanistan'.
    As a result, this opium, which is produced in Afghanistan, is exported all over the world by International Mafia. Consequently, some people use it and are addicted to it. Most people who use the drug are young, and many because of it.

    James

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  2. Also, be careful with repition. Much of the last paragraph has already been mentioned.

    James

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