James Rene Cleer, who was born in pool, in England in 1973, is one of the best teachers at British Council. He finished his Primary School in Talbot and he studied Classical Studies at Manchester University in the UK. In 2003, he met his wife who is from Indoneshia. He got married in 2006 and he has got one dauther.He also has one brother and sister.
His mother tongue is English, and he also can speak Indonesian because his wife is from Indonesia.He has been in Malaysia for tow and holf years and he started work at British council in Julay 2008.
In his free time, he listens to music and playes with gandgets. he also spends his free time with his family. James likes sports, especially football and his favourite team is liverpool.In the future, he wants to becom a good teacher.
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Thanks for writing on the blog bcwriting student! I've rewritten your paragraph below. Compare it carefully with yours to see any differences.
ReplyDeleteWell done. It's good to see you using relative clauses - 'who is from Indonesia' etc.
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James Rene Cleere, who was born in Poole, England in 1973, is one of the best teachers at British Council. He finished his primary school in Talbot and he studied Classical Studies at Manchester University in the UK. In 2003, he met his wife who is from Indonesia. He got married in 2006 and he has got one daughter. He also has one brother and sister.
His mother tongue is English, and he can also speak Indonesian because his wife is from Indonesia. He has been in Malaysia for two and a half years and he started work at British Council in July 2008.
In his free time, he listens to music and plays with gadgets. He also spends his free time with his family. James likes sports, especially football, and his favourite team is Liverpool. In the future, he wants to become a good teacher.