The persson I really admire is my brother. He is very kind,frindly and hard working.When we were chiled, I shered room with him.He is very fanny. while I see him, he entertains me with many jokes. We both like football and we also enjoy going to cinema for wtch movie.
One thing I particularly admair about my brother is attitude to poor people.he always thinking of them. Mybrother is very successful in his business.When he started his work ,he did not have enything but now he whants to bay a house in Dubai.The reason I admire him so much is beacause, he is very flexible in different situation.
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hey i'm chen, here were some sentences that could be better if wrote in the following ways.
ReplyDeletechiled-child-children shered-shared fanny-funny
1.We both like football and we also enjoy going to cinema for wtch movie.
-Both of us keen to play football and watch movie in the cinema.
2.he always thinking of them
-he always thinks about them.
OR- he always considerate of them.
3.The reason I admire him so much is beacause, he is very flexible in different situation.
- The reason why i admire him is because he always get outstanding performance facing any situation.
hope that would be useful to u, bro.
Hi Mohammad
ReplyDeleteYour brother sounds amazing Mohammad. No wonder you admire him. Is he older than you? How many brothers do you have?
When you write on the blog - there is a spelling checker. Do you know how to use it?
When you want to give the reason for something we use 'to' NOT 'for' in English. Eg We also enjoy going to the cinema to watch movies. This is called 'infinitive of purpose' if you want to look it up in a grammar book.
Thanks for contributing to the blog.
Mary