Disadvantage of the Internet
Internet one from the best communications. Most of people use it to keep us attaching with each other. However, there are also many disadvantage for it.
There are three primaries for Internet disadvantages. Firstly, sit a long time using Internet made people worse time with out any things like when use it to see pictures or playing games. Secondly, there is no control for some type of Internet like porn sites. Finally, not good on our healthy because make us have a sick in our eye's and on our body, when we watching movie or playing games and also when we enter chatting websites.
I believe, with these disadvantages but internet still very useful and suitable but this depended on that persons using.
Hi Khaldoon
ReplyDeleteLet me rewrite your paragraph (remember it was a paragraph, not an essay) and you can compare it to what you have written.
There are three main disadvantages to using the Internet. Firstly, sitting for a long time using the Internet can be harmful to your health. This is especially true for people who become addicted to computer games. Your eyes can get sore, and you may experience back and neck pain. Secondly, there are not many restrictions on Internet sites such as pornography. Finally, when we use the Internet, our computers may be attacked by viruses and spyware. For example, our credit card details could be stolen.