Messi is the most skillful football player in the world right now. He was born in Rosario, which is in Argentina, on the 24th of June 1987. He started playing football when he was only five years old. His father Jorge Horacio was a factory worker and his mum Celia Maria was a part time cleaner. Also, he has two older brothers and one sister. Messi started his profession as a football player in his early age, where he played for Barcelona football club.
Messi become famous when he won the FIFA world player of the year in 2009, which he was 21 years old. Secondly, he was one of the many stars in Argentina team, which they are won the FIFA under 20 world cup 2005 in Netherlands. Moreover, he won the Olympic gold medal in 2008 and the golden ball in 2009. Finally, he has been announced as a goodwill ambassador for UNICEF in 11th of March 2010.
In conclusion, I believe that, Messi is a fantastic football player, as well as a big supporter of helping people through Charity's like UNICEF.
Sawah
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... and I thought you'd write about a handball player Sawah!
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Sawah
ReplyDeleteI like your structure and opening and closing comments. There are two main areas to work on in this piece of work - relative clauses and punctuation. Check which relative pronoun goes with each clause. Remember that proper nouns start with capital letters, e.g. Goodwill Ambassador.
The plural of chairty is charities. Nouns ending in 'y' are 'ies' in plural, e.g. baby - babies. Your 'charity's' is a possessive noun, such as the 'charity's name is...' or ' the name of the charity is...'
Good luck with the IELTS course and exam Sawah. I'd be interested to know you results when you get them!
Emma
Ur a idiot
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