Exercise is an essential part in human life.It help to two part of human:body and mental.If you
keep your shape and cure your pain by sport and exercise you will be happy and if you are satisfy
in your life you aren't nervous,stressful and upset.research shows us by exercise you can rise your
concentrate.It means exercise is really useful for student and employees.As a result human need to
exercise if he/she want to make better quality of her/his life.
Samaneh
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ReplyDeleteHi Samaneh
ReplyDeleteThis is much better as a paragraph. Well done! You have a topic sentence and then you explain the reasons (supporting evidence). You also have a concluding sentence. Very good.
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It's a good idea to look at example sentences in a dictionary to see how to use words in your writing.
Thanks for writing on the blog!
Mary