Monday, April 11, 2011

It is difficult to learn a new language - Mimi

It is difficult to learn a new language, such as English. I found it difficult because firstly, there are thosands of vocabulary I need to learn in order to speak this language smoothly. Secondly, to make a good sentences in English I need to use the correct grammar which sometimes are very confusing. Lastly, to speak well in english, we need to use a lot of confidence which is I lack of. In conclusion, we must have passion and be hardworking to learn a new language.
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  1. TeacherApril 13, 2011 at 12:46 AM

    Mimi,

    Good paragraph with some good ideas.

    Maybe this would sound better, 'We need a lot of confidence, which I lack.'

    If you start off using 'I', keep using it and don't then switch to the more general, 'we'.

    Well done!

    See you tomorrow!
    Emma

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